Lokis justu

All of these justu are hyuuga kekkai genkai can only be used with Byagukan which is why all attacks literly explode or Distrupt the Tenketsu of the flow of chakra

Taijustu

Spoiler:

C ranks
Name: Jyuuken Tenketsu (Gentle Fist Chakra Points)
Rank: C
Range: self
Type: supplematary
Element: n/a
Description:
When first learned, the user is capable of finding and striking ninety tenketsu. When the B ranked version is learned, the user is capable of finding and striking one-hundred-eighty tenketsu on the human body. When the A rank version is learned, the user can strike all three-hundred-sixty-one teneketsu on the human body.

B ranks
Name: Daiharichakra (Great Chakra Needle)
Rank: B
Range: mid
Type: Offense
Element: n/a
Description:
The user continues to exert chakra from their fingertips, causing needles of pure chakra to form on their index and middle fingertips. The user can now strike at the opponent’s tenketsu. If the opponent is preparing a technique, the user of the Daiharichakra can strike at the tenketsu, causing the building chakra to burst and cause internal damage.

Name: Hakkeshou: Daikaiten (Hands of the Eight Divination: Great Whirl)
Rank: B
Range: mid
Type: defense
Element: n/a
Description:
Description: The user begins to spin like a top, excreting chakra from their tenketsu at a much higher level than the Hakkeshou: Kaiten. This creates a dome of spinning chakra that will repel or stop Taijutsu, projectiles, and Ninjutsu of B rank or less. The radius of the giant dome is ten meters, and is capable of blowing opponents backward up to fifteen meters.

Can someone accept these??

"kind of injury for five seconds" I am not extremely sure, but pretty sure that we use duration in posts here. To my opinion change this and all else duration you have written in second/minute/hour to posts.

It does not stay on for a post only seconds cannot be changed cause its a hyuuga original tech a post is to long five seconds is all i did not make any of these justu i just picked out of hyuuga techa

Looking these over, needs some work, ill post more later

"Name: Harichakra (Chakra Needle)
Rank: D
Range: mid
Type: Taijutsu
Element: n/a
Description: The user pushes chakra from their fingertips, creating small needles of pure chakra on the tips of the pointer and middle fingers. "

Explain what the effects are, what happens to the victim when hit by the needles?



"Name: Alteration
Rank: C
Range: self
Type: ninjustu
Element: n/a
Description: With this jutsu the user alters the size and shape of their creature in any way they desire. However this can only be used once and once the creature is altered they cannot go back to normal or be altered again as they user will kill it with another alteration."

I think you should change it to B, since you are killing something when you try to apply the jutsu again.


"Name: Daiharichakra (Great Chakra Needle)
Rank: B
Range: mid
Type: Taijustu
Element: n/a
Description: The user continues to exert chakra from their fingertips, causing needles of pure chakra to form on their index and middle fingertips. The user can now strike at the opponent’s tenketsu. If the opponent is preparing a technique, the user of the Daiharichakra can strike at the tenketsu, causing the building chakra to burst and cause internal damage"

Internal damage, sounds more like A-rank Jutsu to me.


"Name: Hakke: Goyubi Hira Kibaku no Herutsu no Jutsu(Eight Trigams: Five Finger Palm Exploding Heart Technique)
Rank: S
Range: n/a
Type: taijustu
Element: n/a
Description: A powerful and deadly proficient Taijutsu strike. By first coating their fingers with the Daiharichakra, the user enters into close combat with the Byakugan activated. By striking five key tenketsu around the heart, which form a pentagon around the heart, with the Daiharichakra activated, the user both closes those five tenketsu as well as ruptures veins and arteries around the heart, causing immediate internal bleeding. With the five tenketsu points around the heart sealed, the chakra of the system has literally no place to travel, and thus almost instantly a great build-up of chakra occurs. The user will then strike the location of the heart with their palm, releasing Hakke Kusho with the strike. The trauma from the impact will cause the built-up chakra to immediately detonate within the heart, causing extreme rupturing and initiating a heart attack upon the spot. If the person does not receive high-level (B Rank or more) medical treatment within the first round of the technique being performed correctly, the individual will perish."

Move to S-rank spoiler.

"Name: Shugohakke: Shirokami (Eight Trigrams Protection: White God)
Rank: S
Range: Mid
Type: Taijustu
Element: n/a
Description: The user visualizes the Hakke, standing in the ying-yang. They quickly project themselves into the white side, creating a shield of chakra all around their body. This shield of pure chakra protects the user from sustaining any kind of injury for five seconds. Legend holds that not even a bjiuu could penetrate it, though this has yet to be tested."

Please put duration of the protection shield in posts, not in seconds. I have said this before I know and I stand firm of it. It is much easier for the one you RP with to calculate his attacks and plan his strategy, if you have in posts. However you get my permission to use seconds if you want it to.


"Name: Shoguhakke: Kamekaze Rasen (Eight Trigrams Protection: Divine Wind Spiral)
Rank: A
Range: mid
Type: Taijustu
Element: n/a
Description: The user visualizes the Hakke, or Divination Field. The Hakke is about five meters in radius. The began to spin in the center of the ying-yang, releasing bursts of chakra as they go. The bursts become destructive slices of chakra that move out from the user, slicing through even solid stone within the first meter. The blades weaken as they move further from the center, dissipating as they reach the edge of the Hakke"

Put rank as S

Fixed

Can't see anything wrong with it. Unless any other mod or admin has problems with it I am approving.



This application has been approved by mod Darion. Congratulations!

Ok now you only have 225 JP to use... Which do you want to buy?

All they add up to 225

You have to choose Loki. All those jutsus together are far more than 225 JP

You have 325 all together